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my try to write a thing like a poem in turkish
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1.       nifrtity
1806 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 01:04 am

correct to me and it is like poems or not what is the rules to write turkish poems

thanks in advance

 

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2.       nifrtity
1806 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 01:05 am

 

Quoting nifrtity

correct to me and it is like poems or not what is the rules to write turkish poems

thanks in advance

 

 

Bu kadar kolay mı ?
beni unuttun ve sildim kalbinden
Bu kadar kolay mı?
sen gittin vedasız hiç birşey söyledin
Bu kadar kolay mı?
ben sana ne düşünüyorsun
oyun gibi mi ?
sence bu oyunu bitiyor
ah bu kadar kolay mı?
senin kalbin tipin ne ?
... taş mı demir mi
Bu kadar kolay mı?
kalbini boş hissiz

 

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3.       Abla
3647 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 01:59 am

First I said WHAT but when I come to think of it it´s a good idea. Learners should actually make a poem competition. What we lack in language skills we could compensate with artistic talent.

 

I´m looking forward to seeing Henry´s poem.



Edited (5/7/2012) by Abla

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4.       gokuyum
5049 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 02:12 am

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Edited (5/7/2012) by gokuyum

5.       gokuyum
5049 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 02:15 am

 

Quoting nifrtity

 

 

Bu kadar kolay mı ?
beni unuttun ve sildin kalbinden
Bu kadar kolay mı?
sen gittin vedasız hiç birşey söylemedin
Bu kadar kolay mı?
ben sana ne düşünüyorsun   ?
oyun gibi mi ?
sence bu oyunu bitiyor  
ah bu kadar kolay mı?
senin kalbinin tipi ne ?
... taş mı demir mi
Bu kadar kolay mı?
kalbin boş hissiz

 

 

 



Edited (5/7/2012) by gokuyum

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6.       gokuyum
5049 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 02:19 am

I want to see English poems of Turks. Especially tunci´s. I write English poems. And I wrote this one for someone I loved.It ended badly

 

            NAME

Stuck in a dream world

I think about possibilities

Without hearing a positive word

I decieve myself about oppurtinities

So what if i believe in  fairytales

which will never end happily

If I dont care about the facts

That is only my misery

Is it so difficult to love someone

Without thinking about obstacles?

What if he is the right one

Why dont you believe in miracles?

I know you are too mature

To believe such nonsenses

Sometimes even logic is in failure

The one wins is what heart senses.



Edited (5/7/2012) by gokuyum
Edited (5/7/2012) by gokuyum

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7.       tunci
7149 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 02:35 am

 

Quoting gokuyum

I want to see English poems of Turks. Especially tunci´s. I write English poems. And I wrote this one for someone I loved.It ended badly

 

            NAME

Stucked in a dream world

I think about possibilities

Without hearing a positive word

I decieve myself about oppurtinities

So what if i believe in  fairytales

which will never end happily

If I dont care about the facts

That is only my misery

Was is it so difficult to love someone

Without thinking about obstacles?

What if he is the right one

Why dont you believe in miracles?

I know you are too mature

To believe such nonsenses

Sometimes even logic is in failure

The one wins is what heart senses.

 

WOW...GOK, you are a poet ! But sorry for it ended badly..You know No love has happy ending, since love- in my literature- means "Suffering","pain" and "sacrifice, imposibilness", otherwise love loses its magical power. [in my opinion]. One day insallah I also would write one love poem in english in here

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8.       gokuyum
5049 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 02:47 am

 

Quoting tunci

 

 

WOW...GOK, you are a poet ! But sorry for it ended badly..You know No love has happy ending, since love- in my literature- means "Suffering","pain" and "sacrifice, imposibilness", otherwise love loses its magical power. [in my opinion]. One day insallah I also would write one love poem in english in here

Thank you tunci. I believe that feeling a deep pain awakens one´s poet inside him. I look forward for your poem.

 

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9.       tunci
7149 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 03:10 am

 

Here you go,  I ve just written one [I know it sucks and depressive one] ;

 

 

my lonely heart

like a fish that is lost

among millions in a vast ocean

Shall my pain ever gonna be heard

if I yell at the skies

I am besieged

by impossible feelings

that will soon collapse

my lonely heart..

-----------------------------------------

 

 

 

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10.       gokuyum
5049 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 03:23 am

 

Quoting tunci

 

Here you go,  I ve just written one [I know it sucks and depressive one] ;

 

 

my lonely heart

like a fish that is lost

among millions in a vast ocean

Shall my pain ever gonna be heard

if I yell at the skies

I am besieged

by impossible feelings

that will soon collapse

my lonely heart..

-----------------------------------------

 

 

 

Great. You feel a pain too I guess.

 

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