correct to me and it is like poems or not what is the rules to write turkish poems

thanks in advance

First I said WHAT but when I come to think of it it´s a good idea. Learners should actually make a poem competition. What we lack in language skills we could compensate with artistic talent.

I´m looking forward to seeing Henry´s poem.

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I want to see English poems of Turks. Especially tunci´s. I write English poems. And I wrote this one for someone I loved.It ended badly

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Stuck in a dream world

I think about possibilities

Without hearing a positive word

I decieve myself about oppurtinities

So what if i believe in  fairytales

which will never end happily

If I dont care about the facts

That is only my misery

Is it so difficult to love someone

Without thinking about obstacles?

What if he is the right one

Why dont you believe in miracles?

I know you are too mature

To believe such nonsenses

Sometimes even logic is in failure

The one wins is what heart senses.

WOW...GOK, you are a poet ! But sorry for it ended badly..You know No love has happy ending, since love- in my literature- means "Suffering","pain" and "sacrifice, imposibilness", otherwise love loses its magical power. [in my opinion]. One day insallah I also would write one love poem in english in here

Thank you tunci. I believe that feeling a deep pain awakens one´s poet inside him. I look forward for your poem.

Here you go,  I ve just written one [I know it sucks and depressive one] ;

my lonely heart

like a fish that is lost

among millions in a vast ocean

Shall my pain ever gonna be heard

if I yell at the skies

I am besieged

by impossible feelings

that will soon collapse

my lonely heart..

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Great. You feel a pain too I guess.