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my try to write a thing like a poem in turkish
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09 May 2012 Wed 11:29 pm |
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And if there´s any mistakes in my grammar, I´m sorry 
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09 May 2012 Wed 11:33 pm |
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Can´t promise you that but let´s see.
well. I suck at this.. haha.
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09 May 2012 Wed 11:34 pm |
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thanks for correction
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10 May 2012 Thu 12:18 am |
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And if there´s any mistakes in my grammar, I´m sorry
Correction does much but encouragement does more. Honestly it is a good try tristere. So keep trying. !! It is not easy to write a poem in Turkish. And you were brave enough to try it. Aferin sana.
Edited (5/10/2012) by tunci
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10 May 2012 Thu 12:31 am |
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Correction does much but encouragement does more. Honestly it is a good try tristere. So keep trying. !! It is not easy to write a poem in Turkish. And you were brave enough to try it. Aferin sana.
ya thats true. gercekten mi? thank you ya i see, i am trying more and if i get something else, i´ll post it tesekkur ederim!
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10 May 2012 Thu 09:25 am |
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The great thing is to make something of your own and stand behind it knowing that none of us is perfect.
You are the least sucking 16-year-old I have seen for a long time, tristerecuerdos.
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10 May 2012 Thu 11:31 am |
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The great thing is to make something of your own and stand behind it knowing that none of us is perfect.
You are the least sucking 16-year-old I have seen for a long time, tristerecuerdos.
nobody´s perfect in this life anyways. lol least sucking? O.o well... thank you. lol
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10 May 2012 Thu 12:20 pm |
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nobody´s perfect in this life anyways. lol least sucking? O.o well... thank you. lol
hatasız kul olmaz
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10 May 2012 Thu 04:59 pm |
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hatasız kul olmaz
Deli sen Orhancısın galiba !
Hatasız kul olmaz, hatamla sev beni
Dermansız dert olmaz, dermana sal beni
Kaybettim kendimi, ne olur bul beni
Yoruldum halim yok, sen gel de al beni.
Feryada gücüm yok, feryatsız duy beni
Sevenlerin aşkına, ne olur sev beni
Sev beni...
Bu feryat, bu hasret, öldürür aşk beni
Uzaktan olsa da, razıyım sev beni
Razıyım sev beni...
Ümitsiz yaşanmaz, sevmemek elde mi ?
Can demek sen demek, gel de gör bende mi ?
Sözümde sitem var, kalpte mi dilde mi ?
Tez elden haber ver, o gönlün elde mi ?
Feryada gücüm yok, feryatsız duy beni
Sevenlerin aşkına, ne olur sev beni
ORHAN BABA [ ORHAN GENCEBAY ]
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11 May 2012 Fri 02:43 pm |
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hello I thought more of writing another poem and I worked on it last night, I haven´t decide what I should write as a title but I´ll just post it. Even though, I´m sure half of my grammar is wrong 
Görmediğim yüzüne dokunmadığım tenin bakamadığım gözlerin hasretim şimdi
Gelde anla gerçekleri gözlerimin içine düşmüş kar taneleri Işıklı ışıklı,
güneş vurmuş misali dalgalanıyorlar şimdi,
en çok sana hasret
Aç bak kalbimi halbuki duurmuş o,
atmıyor sensiz dönsende umut etme bi kere gittin ya Aklın hep "gittiğin" da kalır Geldiğin bitti artık.
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11 May 2012 Fri 08:28 pm |
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hello I thought more of writing another poem and I worked on it last night, I haven´t decide what I should write as a title but I´ll just post it. Even though, I´m sure half of my grammar is wrong
Görmediğim yüzüne, dokunmadığım tenine, bakamadığım gözlerine hasretim şimdi
Gel de anla gerçekleri gözlerimin içine düşmüş kar taneleri Işıklı ışıklı,
güneş vurmuş misali dalgalanıyorlar şimdi,
en çok sana hasret
Aç bak kalbimi halbuki duurmuş o,
atmıyor sensiz dönsen de umut etme bi kere gittin ya Aklın hep "gittiğin" da kalır Geldiğin bitti artık.
Great try for a learner, Tristera.! Bravo. I really am amazed at how your passion for your girl friend is turning into passion for Turkish language. In the begining I was quick to judge you but now I see you as a clever teenager who has started to mastering in Turkish Language. Bravo sana ! !
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