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my try to write a thing like a poem in turkish
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10.       gokuyum
5050 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 03:23 am

 

Quoting tunci

 

Here you go,  I ve just written one [I know it sucks and depressive one] ;

 

 

my lonely heart

like a fish that is lost

among millions in a vast ocean

Shall my pain ever gonna be heard

if I yell at the skies

I am besieged

by impossible feelings

that will soon collapse

my lonely heart..

-----------------------------------------

 

 

 

Great. You feel a pain too I guess.

 

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11.       gokuyum
5050 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 03:26 am

Here another poem from me:

 

NAME 2

 

All songs I like, remind me of you
I ask myself, who am I, who?
Aren´t we all, parts of a whole?
We are together even loneliness call.
Distance is a lie, under the same sky
Don´t we have tents,with wind they fly.
So why am I sad, what is this hole?
Playing the desperate, is that my role?



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12.       Abla
3648 posts
 07 May 2012 Mon 03:39 pm

nifrtity, gokuyum, tunci. You took the challenge and I am so proud of you. Bring us a dozen calculated song lyrics here and they are not worth your lines.

 

Who is the next one who has what it takes?

 

I feel pressure now. I don´t write poems in any language, least of all Turkish. Give me...say...two weeks.

 

 

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13.       tunci
7149 posts
 08 May 2012 Tue 01:49 am

 

Another made up poem of mine tonight [Fena gaza geldik.. ] Gok sıra sende.. Abla´dan da bekliyoruz birkaç satır..!

My country


My country

that never fails to yield

the people of love..

I find no peace

if I live away from you

Oh my beautiful lonely country

how many times I promised you

to bring no shame onto you..

your love above all terenity

For I love you till eternity....

 

 



Edited (5/8/2012) by tunci

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14.       tristerecuerdos
518 posts
 08 May 2012 Tue 01:53 pm

 

Quoting gokuyum

I want to see English poems of Turks. Especially tunci´s. I write English poems. And I wrote this one for someone I loved.It ended badly

 

            NAME

Stuck in a dream world

I think about possibilities

Without hearing a positive word

I decieve myself about oppurtinities

So what if i believe in  fairytales

which will never end happily

If I dont care about the facts

That is only my misery

Is it so difficult to love someone

Without thinking about obstacles?

What if he is the right one

Why dont you believe in miracles?

I know you are too mature

To believe such nonsenses

Sometimes even logic is in failure

The one wins is what heart senses.

 

I like your poem

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15.       Abla
3648 posts
 08 May 2012 Tue 01:58 pm

I got an idea: you write one, tristerequerdos. In T.

16.       tristerecuerdos
518 posts
 08 May 2012 Tue 03:30 pm

 

Quoting Abla

I got an idea: you write one, tristerequerdos. In T.

 

I do not thınk I´m good at wrıtıng poems, but no matter, ı´ll try.

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17.       tristerecuerdos
518 posts
 09 May 2012 Wed 11:07 pm

I just tried to write a poem and I really suck at this I will post It, do not make fun of me haha

18.       Abla
3648 posts
 09 May 2012 Wed 11:12 pm

Quote:tristerecuerdos

do not make fun of me haha

 

Can´t promise you that but let´s see.

19.       tristerecuerdos
518 posts
 09 May 2012 Wed 11:28 pm

Sevdim Seni Olesiye ; 

Neredesin, nerelerdesin?

Cikip gelebilir misin en derinden?

Soyleyebilir misin icte icte "Ozledim seni sahiden..."

Gozlerin baksi gozlerim.

Sozlerin degsin kalbime.

Bir adim da duuslerime. "Sevdim seni olesiye."

 

Lol I tried very hard to write a poem, I think this sucks at least I tried



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20.       tristerecuerdos
518 posts
 09 May 2012 Wed 11:29 pm

And if there´s any mistakes in my grammar, I´m sorry  

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