I think:
Bu şiiri buldum, çok güzel olduğunu düşÃ¼nuyorum. Bu yuzden onu seninle paylaşmak istedim.

Not boring at all metehan2001, on the contrary it's interesting, I'm curious what will happen next and it suits my current level of understanding, so I'll continue working on it

What's really important and special, is to be a friend not in a good day (good times), but in a bad day (bad times).

no, not completely wrong, just that "ihmail" is written instead of "ihmal" so your mistake is understandable.

if I don't have work at the weekend I'll enter the Internet

almost right deli girl:
hey my love, I love you and will always love you, because of my exams I have neglected you too but there's nothing I can do, my love I love you very much, take care my baby

PART 10
As soon as they heard the words "Women's Day" I noticed that all the lady teachers in the room pricked up their ears to our conversation. Shahid must have understood the situation surely, so- as if not I had been the one who asked the question- he answered towards them, especially looking at Luda:
- "My dear Fatih, in such an important day, even a "holiday", I know that your effort to leave our friends alone won't get along well with my character. That means that I have only one preference: to go".
But saying that he couldn't avoid his face to blush slightly. Not only me, but every lady teacher in the room caught his secret glance at Luda. Except of Tosumoto, a smile they couldn't hide appeared on everyone's faces. Luda, who also noticed the situation, bent her head forward smiling.

I'm feeling very sad today but as I want because I promised you I will try to write something about the issue/problem between us or my behavior towards you. I know that I haven't showed you a good example of friendship, my tough behavior shortly looks as if I don't appreciate you. I am aware of everything but you really are a very high quality and a very valuable person in my heart and you are very special, I have already told that before, I loved you very very much and even at this moment when you come to my mind, when I remember how we lived, how we met, I'm sometimes laughing and I'm calling you a crazy girl because you have a very hard personality and I really appreciate you, but I'm not a good person at all and I'm only saying please let her forget me. I'm very very sorry, because I still don't know what I want from life. May everything be is you wish, I wish you first health, then a happy and calm future in life.

the second one can be:
Eğer çalışırSA başarır ("eğer" is optional but you have to use "sa" at the end of the verb).

as for your second question:
It's not "göreceğim" only (which means "I will see" as you pointed), but "ne zaman göreceğim" which means "when will I see" (and "yine"- again or "sonra"- later).

I know that you speak Turkish and I know whom you mean but you could have asked this question politely and instead of him to call me to account why are you doing it? For example we could have become good friends with you but you've broken my heart know that, why did he behave as if attacking something but never mind after all we are both Turks, see you

(and thank you symphony for correcting me)