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Quoting ahalliwell: Quoting caliptrix: Quoting mylo: Quoting ahalliwell:
you are hurting me by what you are doing now
i am sorry i made you angry, please forgive me
you are my heart, my soul , my everything,
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Sen simdi davranislarin dan beni acitiyorsun.
Ben seni kizdirdigim icin uzgunum.
Sen benim kalbimsin,ruhumsun,herseyimsin. |
I think "hurt" is translated "birinin canımı acıtmak" better.
You hurt me: canıMI acıtıyorsun
Your translation would be better like this:
Şimdi yaptıklarınla canımı acıtıyorsun
"üzgünüm" has a light meaning. You can say üzgünüm for something you don't care much. But as far as I know "forgive me" has a stronger feeling, so you should say:
"Beni affet!" This is stronger.
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thanx so in stead of the other i replace with the one you said ? i really need this to work for me  |
Like this,
Simdi yaptiklarinla canimi acitiyorsun.
Ben seni kizdirdigim icin beni affet.
sen benim kalbimsin,ruhumsun,herseyimsin.
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