I read your mail, I think that your vacation didn't pass well, it made me feel sad, but if you come again it won't be like that because I will be with you all the time, of course if you want to. I will improve my English for you because you've affected me very much, I really like you and I'm waiting for you to come again because I love you, take care of yourself.

Hello, how are you, I missed you very much.
Lately we weren't able to see each other at all, what are you doing?
I bought a telephone with the money you sent.
I thank you very much my friend.
Lately I'm in a great difficulty, you know that I'm about to get a license, I couldn't pay the course fee.
I'm waiting for help from you.
If you send me x$ dollars I will be very glad.
I need it very much, without money they are not giving the license and it's not sufficient for my school expenses either.
When you get this letter send me (that much?) ok?
Actually x$ dollars are needed but I don't want to make it difficult for you.
From time to time I walk to school, that way I try to make up x$ dollars by myself.
You can send me the secret code by msn again, this address is my internet address xxx at hotmail or 19880hotmaıl.com ok? I don't use the other addresses.
If you send it to me within a week I would be very happy I'm in a difficult situation, do you know, and I don't want to upset you but I don't have any place to take it from, that's why. I love you, you are a very good person, bye.

one of my brothers- kardeşlerimden biri
one of them- onlardan biri

If my full of drinks body is put on the gravestone, you know the publican how much I love her

I love you but I'm a little angry with you beautiful butterfly

1. Your beauty is spinning my head
2. I wanted to say that you are very beautiful
3. My love, what can you do for me with webcam?
4. What do you say?

Do you know*, I'm waiting for a sound, for a breath, neither a sound nor a breath is coming from you, the leaves of my heart are falling but, _______ I can't say that you are AUTUMN.

Do you know, you come without warning, suddenly the flowers of my soul blossom, a rainbow passes above me but, _______ I can't say that you are SPRING either.

Do you know, the flame of love is wrapping me, my heart is burning, my body is trembling, while I'm on guard(?) but _______ I can't say that you are SUMMER either.

You are ________ my fifth SEASON that I haven't known, seen, tasted and ever lived.

And... you don't have a choice... One day you'll undoubdtedly come.

* I translated "hani" as "do you know" but I'm not sure it's the best way.

I think you did perfectly all right

hey Aiça, I don't see much difference between your translation and mine