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I have written some sentence and need correction and I want a person who can help me to do these sentence to sound more turkish
1.We must go now because we have much to do at home.
-Gitmeliyiz þimdi çünkü çok þeylerimiz evde var.
2.Instead for to walk to the school, you can take the car.
-Yürümektense okula, araba alabilirsin.
3.When she take the key, she can run to the school.
-O anahtarý alýnca, okula koþabiliyor.
or
-O anahtarý alarken, okula koþabiliyor.
Which one of them is right?
4.He must be here now, oh, he will break my heart again.
-O þimdi burda olmalý, aman, o kalbim kýracak/koparacak yinede.
5. If I was you, I wouldn´t take her to my home.
-Senin yerinde olsam, o evime almayacaktým.( not sure )
1.We must go now because we have much to do at home.
ÞÃmdi gitmeliyiz çünkü evde yapacak bir sürü iþimiz var
2.Instead for to walk to the school, you can take the car
Okula yürümek yerine arabayý alabilirsin or Okula yürüyerek gitmektense arabayý alýp gidebilirsin
3.When she take the key, she can run to the school.
Anahtarý aldýðýnda okula koþabilir.
4.He must be here now, oh, he will break my heart again.
Onun þimdi burada olmasý gerekiyor ,oh ,tekrar kalbimi kýracak.
5. If I was you, I wouldn´t take her to my home.
Senin yerinde olsaydým,onu evime almazdým.
some of your sentences in english are not correct gramatically and they need correction too if you want me to correct them i can do it for you
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