I'm gone sister, ok bye, are you going to say anything?

the only thing I would translate differently:

unutulmayacak kadar özelsin-
you are special as much as being impossible to forget
(maybe there's a better way to say it in English, I'm not sure)

When I couldn't receive a reply last night I became worried, you're my everything

I wanted very much in life to have a car like that, it happened but didn't last for long.

I'm glad maybe you should say that to your sender.

I'm in love, I can't satiate from you, you are very beautiful, I can't look at you, I don't dare to love you, it's such a big love, I don't understand it.

Last night I kept thinking about you, I kept consoling myself with memories, I've lived you and became drunk (with joy).

it should be:
kıskanç sevgilim
my jealous love

özgünüm benim yapabileceğim bir şey varmı*
I'm sorry, is there anything I can do?

gerçekten bana çok yardimcı oldunuz
You were really very helpful to me

size minetarim tatlım
I'm grateful to you my sweet

sizin bu iyiliğinizi unutmiyacam
I won't forget your kindness

ben günderdiğin meyileri okudum
I've read the mails you sent

senın için sevindim
I'm happy for you

beni çok mı özledin
Have you missed me a lot?

geçmiş olsun tatlım
Get well my sweet

sen hastamısın
Are you ill?

çok özgünüm tatlım
I'm very sorry my sweet

durumuna üzüldüm canım
I'm sorry for your condition dear

evet seni çok özledim aşkım
Yes I missed you very much my love

ama az kaldı eyülde burdasın o zaman senın çok güzel günler geçireceğiz canım
But a little time has remained, you'll be here in September, then we'll spend beautiful days my dear

Anyway I didn't take it seriously Sono
I knew that it was a joke
Ok, take care, see you later my dear
Soner, where did you disappear to?

look here