such a thing would never come to my mind

first of all "envy" is not hasret, it is "haset". "hasret" is "longing", so one letter would cause such a big difference .

about your translations, 2nd one is correct (except hasret).

first one needs to be changed a little:

(1)Bu haset sadece geçmiþ olan zamana ait bir duygu deðildir.

(2)Bu haset sadece geçmiþ zamana ait olan bir duygu deðildir.

Their meanings are the same.Their translations are:

(2)This envy is not a feeling only connected with the past times.

(1) This envy is not a feeling only connected with the times that passed.

which mean the same.

Then, I have a question for you

What does this mean "Or will it be splitting hairs?"

I should learn more English idioms...

this person tells that the person whom he is speaking to doesn´t speak Turkish, but first he should look at what kind of a Turkish he speaks! Yes, I got angry, anyway, here is the correction:

In this way you disgraced us. What kind of a writing/text is it? "ibo, truck, watermelon", what are you talking about brother like that! But you don´t have any fault, it is our fault because you don´t speak Turkish. Moreover, we left you with this retarded person!

literally = don´t make! I don´t believe when I am alive.

actual meaning = really? I would never believe this.

bir þey deðil

the other thing you asked for translation is long for me to translate at the moment, but it just says "you would be forgotten"

i just want to correct the turkish and let the learners translate!

you are right, -dikçe is translated generally as "the more..." but not in all cases.

if you say "o güldükçe, ben daha mutlu olurum" then it is "the more she smiles, the happier I get."

but you can also say  "bizi ziyarete geldikçe, çikolata getirirdi." "each time he came to visit us, he used to bring chocolates." or "at the times he came to visit us, he used to bring chocolates."

I hope this helps.

after drinking those argentinas(beers), even I cannot walk in the road. (look) how he takes support, i am sure his one hand was on the door and other was on the wall. crazy!

"sýrasý düþmek" is "uygun zamaný gelmek"

I think there should be a "de" before çekinmezlerdi.

Uygun zamaný geldikçe bu endiþelerini söyledikleri gibi bunu Gazi´ye hissettirmekten de çekinmezlerdi.

When it was (appropriate) time, not only they told their worries to their relatives, but also they didn´t hesitate to make Gazi feel/understand this.